I love the last line - I love all of it, but that's a really nice "button". I really like the little touches of naturalness and reality in the descriptions and dialogue, Claude's disillusionment setting in (plus, his little slide from the back of the convertible into the back seat was incredibly sexy), and I love Bennet trying to be confident and utterly failing.
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Date: 2008-01-19 04:15 pm (UTC)